Anyone an english major? or good at writing?

I need a good mark in this course, but I'm not the best at writing. I just need someone to look it over (500wds) and see where I can improve it.

This might not be the best place to ask, but hopefully someone can help :S

My high school teacher is a strange guy... and he still doesn't even know my name! Its been over a month now...

 

I can help. When do you need to hand it in?

 

Not until Thursday. But we have such on topics on our new writing... 1-2 pages about choking on glass, using 15 figurative devices!

Thanks!

 

Ok I'll pm you. I make a good living writing lol so I should be able to help you.

 

Cool, what do you do?

I'm majoring in professional writing myself.